http://radishesncorks.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] radishesncorks.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] neutral_omens 2007-07-24 06:37 am (UTC)

Wanted to tidy up some grammar.

"Oh. You are a wizard as well, then? I couldn't quite tell." There was something a little off about Adam whenever she tried to read him (not that Luna would call it actively reading him - she just did it as a matter-of-fact), and she hadn't been able to see if Adam was indeed a wizard or not. Adam's friend - Brian - was definitely a Muggle, though, so she thought that she'd better not take chances.

"It's a nice footstool, isn't it?" said Luna. She bent down to lift it up in her arms. "Its name is Fido." There was a muffled sound, like a short bark coming from some distance away.

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